222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
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222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Hello all!
This is the fourth comic I've done for my legion, this time showcasing the 4th Mechanized Regiment! Troopers from this regiment have not been seen yet in photographs, not even in my legion thread!
Please search the previous pages of the Clone Army Creations forum to find the other three comics if you haven't read them already.
Here we go!!
Well that's it! I hope you've enjoyed my fourth installment in the 222nd Legion Chronicles! Please leave comments and constructive criticism below.
This is the fourth comic I've done for my legion, this time showcasing the 4th Mechanized Regiment! Troopers from this regiment have not been seen yet in photographs, not even in my legion thread!
Please search the previous pages of the Clone Army Creations forum to find the other three comics if you haven't read them already.
Here we go!!
Well that's it! I hope you've enjoyed my fourth installment in the 222nd Legion Chronicles! Please leave comments and constructive criticism below.
Last edited by Clonecommando007 on Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:58 pm; edited 1 time in total
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Very nice, again! But how could 2 clones be overrun by just 3 droids?
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
They're infantry. They're firing an artillery piece (one of my new creations I might add). They are fighting back battle droids. The CIS are hammering them with artillery too, as is evident by the craters in the street. They are under a lot of tension. Have you ever done that? They are in a forward post in a four way intersection and can't see two ways! They are probably under lots of stress and three infantry seem like a lot to them.
Think front line mentality here!
Think front line mentality here!
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
That was awesome! Those mechanized troopers look amazing.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
That red fighter is very....ugly. I'm sorry but doesn't look like the high tech fighter its supposed to be. sorry.
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It's an old MOC. I've been so busy I haven't had time to build a new one.pdragon27 wrote:That red fighter is very....ugly. I'm sorry but doesn't look like the high tech fighter its supposed to be. sorry.
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
I love the smoke from the cannon.
vecol05- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : kamino
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Awesome job! I love your grey turret!
ARC CloneTrooper141- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 30
Location : PA, USA
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Nice job! I have Trandoshan mercs in the story I'm writing, too!
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I hate the Jedi, but everything else is very nice! I pictures could use some better lighting too.
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Eh, I'm not a big fan of the IST or the droid gunship, but other than that it turned out really well! You've got one of the more expansive city-scapes I've ever seen . I also see you took my breach-loading technique , I really like how you expanded on it.
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Yea, I saw that in your comic Sial, and I was like, "Woah, major awesomeness here!!" So I made an awesome small artillery piece. Instructions maybe if someone asks me.
And what don't you like about the IST?
And what don't you like about the IST?
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Clonecommando007 wrote:Yea, I saw that in your comic Sial, and I was like, "Woah, major awesomeness here!!" So I made an awesome small artillery piece. Instructions maybe if someone asks me.
And what don't you like about the IST?
It seems clunky... scrapped together, almost. I see you bought some Phase II battlepacks .
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
It's a battlepack alternate MOC. A darn good one if I do say so myself. Instructions are on my brickshelf for it.
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Nice!
The whole story arc is great, and the action is cool too!
But I don't like the name Commander Artoo...
The whole story arc is great, and the action is cool too!
But I don't like the name Commander Artoo...
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
I love how you use Lego pieces for special effects instead of any paint programs!
Very good storyline and MOCs, keep up the good work!
Very good storyline and MOCs, keep up the good work!
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
I love the ISTs!!! They are sooooo cool!! Nice story dude!
COMMANDERBAY- Non-Guild Member
- Location : Um,out on Hoth freezing
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Nice. The Nemoidians add a nice touch, and the surprise aerial attacks are snazzy. Excellent.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Alpha wrote:Nice. The Nemoidians add a nice touch, and the surprise aerial attacks are snazzy. Excellent.
They're not Nemoidians, they're Trandos!
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Whatever.
Nemoidians, Trandoshans, filthy scalies.
Nemoidians, Trandoshans, filthy scalies.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Alpha wrote:Whatever.
Nemoidians, Trandoshans, filthy scalies.
Neimodians don't have scales. Thanks for all the comments though!
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
Yeah; Neimies have more of a leathery skin, whereas Trandos are more reptilian.
Plus, Neimies are more cowardly and significantly less bloodthirsty.
Ah well, another comic up, up, and away! I love that little artillery piece and those smoke poofs you made!
Plus, Neimies are more cowardly and significantly less bloodthirsty.
Ah well, another comic up, up, and away! I love that little artillery piece and those smoke poofs you made!
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: 222nd Legion Chronicles: Advance
I really like the first pic, by the way... have I already said that?
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