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Post by Clonecommando007 Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:53 pm

Hello all!
This is the fourth comic I've done for my legion, this time showcasing the 4th Mechanized Regiment! Troopers from this regiment have not been seen yet in photographs, not even in my legion thread!

Please search the previous pages of the Clone Army Creations forum to find the other three comics if you haven't read them already.

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Well that's it! I hope you've enjoyed my fourth installment in the 222nd Legion Chronicles! Please leave comments and constructive criticism below.


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Post by DarthPineapple Tue Dec 23, 2008 6:57 pm

Very nice, again! But how could 2 clones be overrun by just 3 droids? Razz
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Post by Clonecommando007 Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:00 pm

They're infantry. They're firing an artillery piece (one of my new creations I might add). They are fighting back battle droids. The CIS are hammering them with artillery too, as is evident by the craters in the street. They are under a lot of tension. Have you ever done that? They are in a forward post in a four way intersection and can't see two ways! They are probably under lots of stress and three infantry seem like a lot to them.

Think front line mentality here!
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Post by -Aki- Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:03 pm

That was awesome! Those mechanized troopers look amazing.
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Post by pdragon27 Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:04 pm

That red fighter is very....ugly. I'm sorry but doesn't look like the high tech fighter its supposed to be. sorry. Embarassed
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Post by Clonecommando007 Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:08 pm

pdragon27 wrote:That red fighter is very....ugly. I'm sorry but doesn't look like the high tech fighter its supposed to be. sorry. Embarassed
It's an old MOC. I've been so busy I haven't had time to build a new one.
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Post by vecol05 Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:38 pm

I love the smoke from the cannon.
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Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:48 pm

Awesome job! I love your grey turret! Smile
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Post by 667thLegion Tue Dec 23, 2008 7:59 pm

Nice job! I have Trandoshan mercs in the story I'm writing, too! Smile
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Post by Zepher Tue Dec 23, 2008 8:04 pm

I hate the Jedi, but everything else is very nice! I pictures could use some better lighting too.
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Post by pdragon27 Tue Dec 23, 2008 8:07 pm

In what sets do you get those rappelling pieces?
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Post by Sialboats Tue Dec 23, 2008 8:19 pm

Eh, I'm not a big fan of the IST or the droid gunship, but other than that it turned out really well! You've got one of the more expansive city-scapes I've ever seen Shocked . I also see you took my breach-loading technique Razz , I really like how you expanded on it.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:00 am

Yea, I saw that in your comic Sial, and I was like, "Woah, major awesomeness here!!" So I made an awesome small artillery piece. Instructions maybe if someone asks me.

And what don't you like about the IST?
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Post by Sialboats Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:03 am

Clonecommando007 wrote:Yea, I saw that in your comic Sial, and I was like, "Woah, major awesomeness here!!" So I made an awesome small artillery piece. Instructions maybe if someone asks me.

And what don't you like about the IST?

It seems clunky... scrapped together, almost. I see you bought some Phase II battlepacks Razz .
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:06 am

It's a battlepack alternate MOC. A darn good one if I do say so myself. Smile Instructions are on my brickshelf for it.
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Post by Thunder-blade Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:07 am

Nice!

The whole story arc is great, and the action is cool too!

But I don't like the name Commander Artoo... Razz
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Post by Jedi Joe Wed Dec 24, 2008 1:10 am

I love how you use Lego pieces for special effects instead of any paint programs!

Very good storyline and MOCs, keep up the good work!
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GIMP is NOT a paint program!!! Razz
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Post by COMMANDERBAY Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:10 am

I love the ISTs!!! They are sooooo cool!! Nice story dude! Wink
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Post by Alpha Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:12 am

Nice. The Nemoidians add a nice touch, and the surprise aerial attacks are snazzy. Excellent. Wink
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Post by Jedi Joe Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:12 am

Alpha wrote:Nice. The Nemoidians add a nice touch, and the surprise aerial attacks are snazzy. Excellent. Wink

They're not Nemoidians, they're Trandos! Razz
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Post by Alpha Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:13 am

Whatever. Razz

Nemoidians, Trandoshans, filthy scalies.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:14 am

Alpha wrote:Whatever. Razz

Nemoidians, Trandoshans, filthy scalies.

Neimodians don't have scales. Razz Thanks for all the comments though!
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Post by 80-0 Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:16 am

Yeah; Neimies have more of a leathery skin, whereas Trandos are more reptilian. Wink

Plus, Neimies are more cowardly and significantly less bloodthirsty. Razz


Ah well, another comic up, up, and away! I love that little artillery piece and those smoke poofs you made!
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Post by Zepher Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:05 am

I really like the first pic, by the way... have I already said that?
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